your article is very eye catching and looks very professionally done showing your knowledge of indesign i really like how the text overlaps the image and your have more than one colour of text . your information is very informative and would captivate the readers . i feel you could improve via your style of journalism as i feel by the looks of this article it would be more of a magazine style article and maybe more use of colloquial language or a conversational style text rather than informative like in a newspaper . But overall i think this is a really good piece especially visually !
An eye catching and well written first piece of journalism Reanne. You have carefully considered your target audience and this is in evidence from your layout and writing style, as well as the colour scheme. Colour scheme is not always legible- this may be an area for improvement. You express your opinions clearly, and draw on research. Il like your experiments with layers, columns and captions and you can build on this in the next task. Vanessa
your article is very eye catching and looks very professionally done showing your knowledge of indesign i really like how the text overlaps the image and your have more than one colour of text . your information is very informative and would captivate the readers . i feel you could improve via your style of journalism as i feel by the looks of this article it would be more of a magazine style article and maybe more use of colloquial language or a conversational style text rather than informative like in a newspaper . But overall i think this is a really good piece especially visually !
ReplyDeleteAn eye catching and well written first piece of journalism Reanne. You have carefully considered your target audience and this is in evidence from your layout and writing style, as well as the colour scheme. Colour scheme is not always legible- this may be an area for improvement. You express your opinions clearly, and draw on research. Il like your experiments with layers, columns and captions and you can build on this in the next task. Vanessa
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